Thursday, May 26, 2011

05.26.2011

Hey
how are you ?
By this way let me tell you something . I never seen a smile that can light like your it's simply the radiant .


There's something really interesting about the structure of the stanza and how it relates to the melancholy tone. I appreciate the beat he takes between the end of his sentences and the punctuation that signifies the end of the sentence- it just adds so much depth to the words. The way he speaks of light almost makes it tangible. And what is "the radiant" that he refers to in the terminal line? I think it's a question we should all be asking ourselves at least once in this lifetime.

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